Nah, but i cant get this poem right oh , its fine darling ill love it regardless No what if its not something that idk, you can remember? no I like it that you are using your creative freedom to make a weird poem and you, writing my character yourself can we tell this is a poem tho? cause it just feels like 2 people talking my love are you gone??…. guess i have to write it myself then alright lets poem , or what ever piece of literature this is and I guess you are gone?? oh no, im nervous now, oh no i am anxious i have to do something unique something out of the ordinary…. but no words in the english dictionary are new but a combination of those can really be unthinkable how about these next lines?? yes yes i keep saying all this stuff, but not writing stuff down…. i have to write something thats personal how about writing "…." those "…" convey how I pause when I pretend like I am thinking something when i talk to you but i am really scared of you??? can a poem really capture emotions? isnt all this just a proof it can? its for the reader to say then again those lines were based on the assumption that the reader will consider this emotional and wanting reassurance that it is but these are just plain words how about the words "you mean so much to me?" what should i tell her should i tell her that want another picture of her best art to keep as my wallpaper? oh but somethimes i think so much i dont even love the stanzas they dont even rhyme im yours and you are mine? is that intentional? is it just going to be I love you in the end… thats the suspense?? even if i am telling that it must be better than that somehow this "i love you" must be better than all the other "i love you"s ,I have told you oh but i should have atleast saved that "i love you" for the end of the poem so it carries more weight how about something like? me wanting to cry on your arms and holding your hands and walking down a random street how about spending rest of my days with you and growing old together how about….. i love you